Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
©2009 =Akrura
:iconakrura:

Artist's Comments

c:

Critiques


:iconwhateverjulie:
:plotting: its nice... i really like the sketch look you gave to it! i love the texture of the hair!!! but the "outfit" seems a little weird... is it supposed to be a mini dress? if it is then you should put more fabric lines and less her body lines at her hips... it would make it have more depth...

you legs are great, perfect length, the thighs could have been just a bit thinner but it still looks good!

the face is to long for the neck... it kinda throws me off ^^;

note = i love the hair and the legs... but most of your basic line art needs work ^^; practice on the lengths and wrinkles in clothing!
The Artist thought this was FAIR
1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair.

Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconsinfully-absurd:
Cute.
I love the minimal colouring and bright tones.
C:
Seems like your trying to hide toes though.
Hehe.
:iconakrura:
Thankies c:

Yes, toes make me go crazy and I never want to draw them so I just hide them. Problem solved XD

--
Have a pheasant plucking day :)

Details

May 21
149 KB
149 KB
1181×1485

Statistics

2
1 [who?]
37 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Camera Data

HP
HP Scanjet G3010
May 21, 2009, 7:42:42 PM

Site Map